Monday, 6 November 2017

Magazine Advertisement Draft 1 and Feedback - April

This is my first draft of my magazine advert. I have tried to match the theme of my music video and digipak as well as making it look as realistic to an advertisement as possible by keeping the features of one. I have asked for some feedback which includes responses from my target audience to allow me to gather different opinions of what people like and dislike about it. Therefore I will know how to improve my final draft.


What went well
  • I really like the shots involved
  • The writing is clear and easy to read
  • The background has a good colour scheme
  • I really like the font, it’s really easy to read and I think that the background images work well together
  • I like how there is a consistent theme and that everything matches and works well with each other

To Improve
  • Maybe change the font of the song title to suit the theme a bit more or make the size of it bigger
  • Too much of a regimented structure on the logos and star ratings
  • Make it clear who the star ratings are from 
  • Make the Virgo Records logo clearer by adding the name of the company underneath

Now I have an idea of what other peoples thoughts and expectations are for my magazine advert. Therefore I know what I can do to improve it so that my target audience will like it more. 

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Final Magazine Advertisement - April

I have now added the improvements that I was given by my target audience. Here is my final outcome for my magazine advert: